Kuroh + Shiro - kissing [side view 1 WIP]

Okay so here's the deal I want to draw a picture of these two kissing, I'm planning on calling the picture kissing you softly but as you can see I suck at side views. So this picture is to show what I've got so far in my attempt at drawing side views. 

So if any one has any tips to help me getter then that would be great, and yes I already know the line practice makes perfect. The thing is no matter how many times I try it always ends the same a complete fail!

So yeah I'm just wondering if I'm getting better or not so I'll probably be posting other pic's like this as I go along. That way you guys can let me know if I'm getting better or not as the case may be.

Oh the wip stands for work in progress okay.

Well I'll be waiting to hear from you guys.